You.

You.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

You kissed me, when my eyes were closed.

You held me, we were fully clothed.

You touched me, when the feel arose

You loved me, when you felt it were right.

 You chose me; it was love at first sight.

You protected me, when I was caused a fright.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Lovely poem, enjoyed this a lot. They way a person feels safe with someone especially a lover.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The rhythm of this was perfect for the story you were saying

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice rhyme scheme... very sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so sweet ..the rhyme is good and nice too :)
keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


sweet and sensual!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


so much told in so little words!!! thats called poem! thank you...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sweet, loving and heartfelt... wonderful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


So sweet and darling.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So cute :3

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 5, 2012
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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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