Goodbye...

I feel your eyes burning into my back, as i walk away.

Leaving you behind, leaving you in the past.

We were heading nowhere, headed only in circles.

Its better I leave, better we spend time apart.

Someday you’ll understand, some day we can be friends.

Treasure that last kiss, that kiss that still lingers on your lips.

Treasure each memory, I’ll be thinking of you in my heart.

I’ll remember your laugh and I’ll treasure your smile.

Goodbye my lover, goodbye for a while.

Author's Note

I think this isn't very good so please be gentle when reviewing!

Reviews

Now that's what I'm talking about. This is much better. It takes courage to embrace change, and this piece makes you feel why.

[The Analog Kid]

Very succinct. I liked the lingering impressions.

[Gaige]

It read like a diary entry to me. It's like you are trying to share a memory: how you felt, and how you so desperately wanted someone else to feel. It was very moving, and rather unconventional which I like. :]

[AK]

It is quite good, Jenna! If you aren't happy, you could go back and start editing it.