HATE

I hate being scared.

I hate not knowing.

I hate being unprepared.

I hate feeling alone

I hate it when you aren’t there.

I hate not wanting to go home.

I hate not going anywhere

I hate who I am

I hate being me

I hate not having a friend

I hate it all can’t you see?

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

yeah! yeah! this is nice (: the only thing i can be a critic about is, how you wrote, i hate being alone and hate not wanting to go home, put them together so it reads congruently. you should use the rhyme one after another so its near the middle since you don't emphasize rhyme in the whole poem. put the end rhyme verses one after another (put them in the middle) and leave the others alone. this poem needs to come to a point, (meaning it needs to be sharper) you can use the "home" and "alone" rhyme to sharpen the edge of the poem if you put them together (: you are a great writer! -s

[Cancelled]

Nice and simple! Really good job! :)

[SlightlyOdd]

Good expression of feeling simple and to the point