HATE

I hate being scared.

I hate not knowing.

I hate being unprepared.

I hate feeling alone

I hate it when you aren’t there.

I hate not wanting to go home.

I hate not going anywhere

I hate who I am

I hate being me

I hate not having a friend

I hate it all can’t you see?

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

yeah! yeah! this is nice (: the only thing i can be a critic about is, how you wrote, i hate being alone and hate not wanting to go home, put them together so it reads congruently. you should use the rhyme one after another so its near the middle since you don't emphasize rhyme in the whole poem. put the end rhyme verses one after another (put them in the middle) and leave the others alone. this poem needs to come to a point, (meaning it needs to be sharper) you can use the "home" and "alone" rhyme to sharpen the edge of the poem if you put them together (: you are a great writer! -s

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes I can. I hate it too! But love this!

[Amila Jay]

I am totally into this! Agree with you 100% .. I love this write:))

[Missy Moooooo]

i can see. I'm sorry. Nice write.

[Southern Cross]

Very interesting choice of type set on page. Emphasizing the word hate in bold, larger font helps create the intensity of the mood. I concur with the rhyme scheme but the emotions expressed outweigh the sequence of the rhyme. Expressing an emotion through writing can be a positive release. I think we all have had emotions such as these at some time or another. Powerful read !

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I hope someday, you will be able to make a list of the things you love.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Hate.....extreme dislike and aversion to something, a strong word. I would truly hate to hate it all. Hate destroys, it destroys the one who hates. One who feels such strong emotion about everything could turn it around learn to change the things they can and accept the things they can't and be wise enough to know the difference. One who can feel so powerfully can release this energy in a positive manner and oh what a light they would be. Very nice piece.

[poeticpiers]

scrap the negativity concentrate on what you love instead.Being young is a tough row to hoe.But remember that we older folk all went through it

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow, This is some powerful work. There's almost too much truth to bear. You really show deep thought as you dug all the way down to the root cause. Bravo! There is a bit of us all in this poem.

[Ayanda Mteto]

love is not so far away from hate, we hate because we love it. women who are abused by their boyfriends seem to love their boyfriends more as hate being treated. love and hate are a hard concept to understand, but I enjoy your poem made me reliase I actualy enjoy my insecurities :-)

[Racy Daniel]

Well done . Hates exist just because of love exist as well. Try to make a list that you love.