Sydney Trip.

Sydney Trip.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Rocking up at 5am, I see my classmates I see my friends.

Everyone tired, everyone excited.

Waiting, for this trip to finally begin.

We’ve waited our whole lives, waited for this day.

It’s the class of twenty twelve and it’s going to be the greatest.

We flew and we paddled, we shopped and we dropped,

We ventured all around the city, we ventured until we got lost.

We were sick, we were tired, and we didn’t know what to do.

Things got catty, things got too much to handle.

But in the end we survived, we’re now back in Brisbane,

And we can now all admit, Sydney Australia has impacted our lives.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


Author's Note

SuicidePact.
I just got back from my year 12 trip to Sydney , it was amazing, even though I was born in Sydney I haven’t lived there since I was 5 so it was an amazing experience.

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I feel short-changed...my school's field trips always sucked a*s. The most interesting place we ever would have gone was to Boston, but it was right after 9/11 and one of my dipshit classmate's equally dipshit-y mothers was worried that terrorists might vaporize Boston while we were there, so we didn't get to go.
F*****g dipshits.
Anyway, I'm glad you had fun, and that you weren't attacked by terrorists.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sounds awesome, although waking up at 5am surely sucked, lol.
Good write, though!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hehe, wow! That sounded awesome!! Man, i wish i was there, it must be so cool 'down' by u guys! :D Im really glad u guys had a good time, that sounds awesome!! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ooo...wow! Ha ha, yes.. going to a whole new place is exciting! Awesome adventure you had. It sounds fun and it's as if I am with you in this poem. =)
Great write!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Great work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is an exciting write. It's like it takes you on an adventure as you read it! Great job SP :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very nice poem! Reminds me of our school trip to the united kingdom. We were just as tired:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes you don't know how much fun you had till you're home again.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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