I care.

I care.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I care about the world,

I care about your sadness.

I care for those who I’ve never met.

I care for the ones who treat me like crap.

I care too much; it may lead me to hurt.

I care too much, when you don’t care at all.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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I feel like this sometimes. But you can always find someone who truly cares though it may take a bit of searching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree with Michael. You've penned your emotions honestly. Perhaps a little personalization, a little imagery will make this poem even better. Nevertheless, it is a nice poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree. Amazing write. It says a lot. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


really simple but powerful and shows ur true colors 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem. It shows your gentleness with a pointed edge. Well done.
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Altruism suits you. Asking nothing in return, even earning derision, ought not dissuade you from kindness. Well thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nice:) the poem is written in really simple language but is very strong and powerful. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I care, for you and your simplistic nature of sending a powerful message. One that packs a powerful punch! nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2012
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