I care.

I care.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I care about the world,

I care about your sadness.

I care for those who I’ve never met.

I care for the ones who treat me like crap.

I care too much; it may lead me to hurt.

I care too much, when you don’t care at all.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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nice work, short and revealing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and beautifully written! Love it :D
Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just love poem that intimate to the poet, that are more than rhyme and struture but deep sincere emotion, enjoy your write.


Posted 12 Years Ago


nice, short and simple. great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its nice short and powerful. Love the repetition. try ending the last part like "but the question is...why don't you care at all" i think it would fit in much better in my opinion

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A very short, but strong piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So do I. Good short write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and short but oh so powerful, you never fail to impress me. Great job :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and short but made sense. ^^ Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

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