I care.

I care.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I care about the world,

I care about your sadness.

I care for those who I’ve never met.

I care for the ones who treat me like crap.

I care too much; it may lead me to hurt.

I care too much, when you don’t care at all.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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A good message. Nice write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can really understand and relate to this. Very nice poem. So relatable and real with the emotions that come with it all.

Posted 12 Years Ago


yes the message is so true
just a little thought about the word "who" in the 3th stanza
for me can be "whom" ..
=] nice work

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the echo and bulid of of this poem :) Its was good! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Funny (as in funny strange) how that works out. The world needs people like you to make up for the ones who don't care at all.

Posted 12 Years Ago


good progression!

Nice echo effect that perfectly sums up the poem towards the end (with a second care) Clever technique!

Filled with emotion, also I admire the contraction on the last line. "care too much, don't care at all" Wonderful line!!!

Awesome poem! I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem went from sweet to sour.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and to the point. I like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow so relateible and understandable

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem so it makes it way more enjoyable. well done as normal. You have a lot of talent, and you show it off very well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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