forbidden love.

It was forbidden love, she was not meant to fall for the man of his nature.He had no self respect; love to him was only a game. They were together for a while; he twisted his way out of all he did wrong.She forgave and forgave; her love for him was blind. He had his luck for a while, but luck was all it was. It didn’t take long for his true colours were suddenly exposed. She was broken, she was depressed, and she had no more faith in this world.Will she ever learn to trust a man again? Has he broken her to a point of no repair? She looks back on what was, she wished she hadn’t been so blind. It was forbidden love, she was not meant to fall for the man of his nature.

Reviews

[zero binty]

Haunting. I watch this type of ordeal just about every day. Females like the bad boy image, but not the actuality of it. Then when they finally meet a decent person, their learned behaviour of untrusting wrecks the situation. Or maybe males are just dumb...yah, we are. I'm going with that.

[CHRIS ANDES]

so forbidden
i take it for real
=]

[Alessander]

funny how women tend to fall for "the wrong man". why is that? hmmmm

[kelly24]

I have definitely been there before sweetheart. Don't waste time blaming yourself. Keep the faith, there's good one's out there!

[Southern Cross]

Seems you know my ex. Describes my moods at times. Please check out some of my poems. I'm sure you will relate.

[jennifer little]

wonderful poe,m

[5minutesofcrazy]

I really like the prose style that it is formatted in. It adds a hurriedness to it, which I like. The chiasm here is nice, it fits in both places and becomes more impactful the second time. The transition of emotions in the read is quick and sharp, as the poem dictates so kudos there as well. The emotion just emanates off the page. Well done.

[Archia]

I like how the last line is repeated at the end, it really reinforces it and it actually changes its impact. The first time it's just a simple note, but then the last one actually has depth to it, it has meaning. I enjoyed the story also in this.

[Chantel]

This is good. I lived this story haha. Now I found someone amazing and I'm scared, like what zero binty said. Go figure. Anyway, good write. :)

[closed..acct]

Yes A Haunting write indeed,
Nicely expressed though, I enjoyed it.