The way you make me feel.

Have you ever been told...that your hair glistens in the warm sunshine?

Did you realise, that your smile brightens up the room; it takes away all the gloom.

I bet you never knew the way you make me feel,

When we aren’t together i feel so out of touch, I just don’t know who I am, what to do or where to go.

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

The verse was beautiful but I agree the read may have flowed better with a different
type set..

[rosemary keogh]

Beautiful. I like it.

[emilythestrange]

Beautiful,and so true.I've never been in love,and I can't even imagine how it feels,but you have painted a picture for me,and all other readers.Stunning.

[Jock Engelman]

i like the message, but i dont like the structure, as you probably noticed, i prefer the shorter sentences (about 10 syllables or less). but i still like the message (as i stated before)

[Michael Opoku-Addo]

A very nice and true piece.

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is really good! I love it. I know the feeling of losing who you are when you aren't with that person you want to be with. =)

Stunning piece!

[AK]

Very nice topic to write about. Last line's out of place. Would do better if you extend it a bit. Great write;)

[s.r.knight]

I love this. I love the last line, I can definitely relate to the idea of feeling lost without someone. This is beautiful