The way you make me feel.

Have you ever been told...that your hair glistens in the warm sunshine?

Did you realise, that your smile brightens up the room; it takes away all the gloom.

I bet you never knew the way you make me feel,

When we aren’t together i feel so out of touch, I just don’t know who I am, what to do or where to go.

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

Awww you writing cute

[Wren]

Cute poem.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sounds like Love to me ...

Sweet .. Jazz

[.....]

Lovely prose, I think some of the line breaks could be improved. But I like this. That person that fills us with butterflies and makes us think poetically. lol I think every girl and guy has at least one who inspires poetry.

Blessings, Tammy

[Emerald Seas]

Nice thoughts in this piece. Go with your gut, tell them how you feel!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

The sweet thoughts of young love, I hope you have told them how you feel.

[mariah]

very sweet.i have never felt this way, but im sure thats how it feels to be in love. great work, as usual :)
-mariha

[Marie]

This is a warm way to share your feelings.

[MandaBear]

Well thank you:P this was very cute

[CrimsonBlaze]

Gwah this is so cuuuute :D. And it's so like everyone (sometimes including me) when we're lovesick and daydreaming about a distant crush X3 !