The way you make me feel.

Have you ever been told...that your hair glistens in the warm sunshine?

Did you realise, that your smile brightens up the room; it takes away all the gloom.

I bet you never knew the way you make me feel,

When we aren’t together i feel so out of touch, I just don’t know who I am, what to do or where to go.

Reviews

[Alex Crow]

Ah love, so innocent. So beautiful and true.

[CHRIS ANDES]

..I can imagine the facial features
=]

[Aehr]

innocent and honest...

[EmoVampyrePoet]

How I feel about my boyfriend.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

such honest work
:)

[Octob3r Star]

Great work :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, strong and exact description of how lonely we feel without the person we love! I like your poems, so nice flow...

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Oh it is so sweet and romantic.... I love it so much how you arranged it and the words you used! Lovely!

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice :) I like it. Great work

[Becky Clancy]

Very nicely said, I love it (: