(please help me name this.)

I can’t stop falling, even if I could I wouldn’t.

I just need to keep punishing myself, for all my mistakes.

Nowhere near perfection, I’m no bloody saint.

I just want my own easy escape, my personal getaway.

I can’t look into the mirror without filling my eyes with hateful tears.

It’s like I hate what I see, like i wish I wasn’t me.

You’ve seen the way they look at me, the way the snicker and stare.

If you were me you’d know exactly how that feels, exactly why I can’t deal.

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

Personal Getaway? I name my own work, and I don't really believe in correction or anything like that. Art is what you make of it, not what someone tells you is misspelled or imperfect. Its what you think is perfect that matters, others only comment to correct or judge for self gratification. I guess its like an "I did something today" issue that's self evident. Good luck with naming your work. Cheers, have a good day. :)

[Tamia123]

My Escape :) I love this poem! So fulll of emotion. Good job!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Just takin' another look at this one again ('cause I was browsing the Popular Writing section--I should've said hehe), and didnt see my review. Thought i reviewed this one before, but just didnt see my review but, just wanted to say that this was awesome. I feel the same way kinda everyday, these words. Not sure about a title tho. The other reviewers have better ones than I, heh ;) Great job with it tho :)

[Rene Velez]

PUSHED...is what I would name it, but I find the write disturbing, sad for someone as young as you, there are better days to come.

[5minutesofcrazy]

I don't know if I have a name, but this is amazing. Anytime I'm forced to take time away from this site I'm saddened that I'm missing your works. The intensity that you consistently bring to the table is inspiring. The reflection that is shown in this is captivating. The growing sense of pain, and even doom is effective. Well done.

[Geraldine]

I really loved this one, ^^ I sure understand this. Brilliant one.

[Who Cares]

I do like " InfiniteInk's" idea, I think that "Guilty Eyes" is quite suting for this piece."I can’t look into the mirror without filling my eyes with hateful tears." that is the line that would make the title. Great piece though

[InfiniteInk]

Guilty Eyes...

[J. J. Nightingale]

"Can't" .. kinda says it all .. Most of us have felt this way, at one time or another ..
Maybe start looking at the world around you .. what do you see .. what is beautiful to you .. our perceptions change as the years go by .. look up, smile .. YOU are ALIVE !

Jazzy

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I like the name.