No escape.

I feel so scared, like there's no one to protect me.

I can't find my feet in a world of darkness.

Can't find my way, there is no easy escape.

I wan't to run, but my legs don't seem to work.

 

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

Good but i wish you would kinda improve the flow though other than that good

[exotic flotsam]

Dark isolation, moreso still menaced with being alone. No worthy escape is easy. I like the intensity even with uncertainty's fear.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Know what ya mean. It's like ya cant turn to anyone for help, and ur just left by yourself in the darkness sometimes just hoping someone will take u by the hand and show ya the way out. Excellent poem tho, nice job! :)

[Tabitha t]

Reminds me of the feeling you ha've during a bad dream. You want desperately to escape but your legs don't seem to want to move fast enough. Feels like you are running through a deep sludge....( probably your blankets)

[s.r.knight]

I have dreams like this ALL the time. You have a knack for painting a vivid picture with words. This is a lovely piece!

[Canicus]

when I read this I saw exactly as the poem says. nice write keep it up

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Love will carry you. Good read, well done.