No escape.

I feel so scared, like there's no one to protect me.

I can't find my feet in a world of darkness.

Can't find my way, there is no easy escape.

I wan't to run, but my legs don't seem to work.

 

Reviews

[khayran]

very sad poem.

[Sheena Marie Lee]

i like this very good....

[5minutesofcrazy]

Very touching. The passion is just electric. I love that it's short, because it reminds me of the times when I've felt intense feelings without being able to expound. It adds a depth that is exciting to experience.

[zero binty]

There is not always a way out. When that happens, just realize that Life really wants you to learn something. So pay attention. And stuff.

[Who Cares]

Short but powerful, I enjoyed reading this although the flow was a little choppy but at any rate this was breath-taking.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes fear is the thing that ultimately becomes the demise of yourself. It holds you captive and immobile. "There is nothing to fear, but fear itself". Well done.

[Geraldine]

Short but very straight to the poem which I adored so much. ^^

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I am sorry of these are your feelings- If so , I am on the same page .
Short and simple does it every time.

Chloe

[Michael Thrower]

Very nice, I have dreams like this sometimes. If you took it in a literal sense.

[Barbara Walker]

Nothing enigmatic about this poem, tells it like it is. It reminds me of those nightmares when you want to run and are just stuck, can't move. It's a horrible feeling to feel absolutely alone in the world. Many people can identufy with this poem, as I am sure many people feel this way sometime in their life. It's been my experience that there are no easy escapes!