No escape.

I feel so scared, like there's no one to protect me.

I can't find my feet in a world of darkness.

Can't find my way, there is no easy escape.

I wan't to run, but my legs don't seem to work.

 

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

why so negative? :D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh very nice toughts in verse...Yes, really there is no easy escae..but we have to try so many times...Thank you!
~nia~

[jennifer little]

good job i like d it

[BS Johnson]

I can't tell you how many times I've had dreams like that- where I couldn't move, couldn't scream, etc. You described them perfectly, like you were in my head. Great job.

[Octob3r Star]

Good Stuff

[The Animal Guy]

Very nice poem, SuicidePact! If you close your eyes you can practically envision the emotions happening in this poem, that's what I did.

Poems in my opinion are gateway from the mind to the soul and this one definitely touched my soul.

Keep up it!

[Tamia123]

I love poems that are short but powerful, and this is that :) I think this is an emotion we can all share. I loved it!

[Angelic Surrender]

Hard times. Good write

[R J Askew]

Ach, this is the classic nightmare scenario. Many of us have had that mare or feeling. But knowing that does not make it any the less scary.

[ChervenkovaM]

No escape indeed. I like this, it's short simple, but carries so much feelings :)