No escape.

I feel so scared, like there's no one to protect me.

I can't find my feet in a world of darkness.

Can't find my way, there is no easy escape.

I wan't to run, but my legs don't seem to work.

 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice emotion put into this poem. Short but speaks a lot. Nice feelings and descriptions used.

[CHRIS ANDES]

..short and interesting
=]

[Amila Jay]

Can relate this. great poem.

[S. Michael Long]

another nice poem! I keep wanting to read more though! what happens next!!! -s

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good job putting all these images and thoughts in such a short poem. It isn't easy, but you managed to accomplish it pretty well.

[MissDragon]

Very relatable. :)

[Rene Velez]

nice work, somber piece

[Becky Clancy]

I can feel the emotion in here, I can relate to this alot, I really like this poem ^_^b

[Rasputin]

I've had many a nightmare just like this.

[Thea]

Great poem...Your emotions were well expressed...
:)))