We are one.
A Poem by SuicidePact.
We're hand in hand, Face to face, Chest against chest. Heartbeat to heartbeat. My body, your body. We are one.
© 2012 SuicidePact.
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Lovely. The title fits the words just as the words fit the title and the lovely imagery of two.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Very simple but I liked that you have so much to say but say it all in so few words :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Again, so much power in so little words! Simple and awesome poem :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Powerful words in a short piece! =D I love this!!
Great one!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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This was cute, This reminds me of me and my bestfriend. Sweet write I like it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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This is a very nice poem. It expresses your intent very well. My favorite lines are We're hand in hand, face to face. Good write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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nice poem...
Posted 13 Years Ago
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It's short but powerful. With few words you create a vivid image of friendship. Great poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Nice poem...Short yet creative.
:)))
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Cute and to the point great write
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on March 22, 2012
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SuicidePact. Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia
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