Time Traveler

"Where am I?" asked the man in the puffy pants.

So i told him the year, which he thought was quite queer.

 

 

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

I love this poem! If you fly real fast around the world and keep passing the International Date Line, you will go into the future... what? I'm wrong again? Okay, but this poem is still great as it shows the possible disorientation such a time traveler might have.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

an innocence
i can't possess

[Mockingbird]

i guess he landed in the wrong century. it's an interesting concept. great poem.

[Marie]

Strange...good rhyming in the last line.

[SlightlyOdd]

haha Nice