Love War.

It's hard to imagine a life without love.

Hard to picture a world with only hate.

We're already surrounded,there's no easy escape,

We can't let it win,  we must remain strong.

But love is no factor, when it comes to the war.

Reviews

[Who Cares]

The poem was great until the last line, it just didnt flow with the rest of the poem. I like the concept and I like your train of thought. The last line is powerful and would work well in another piece. " All is fair in love and war" We cannot possibly ever love if we have never hated. They are opposites and in order to have one you have to witness the other. " There is a fine line between love and hate" Sometimes you love so much you begin to hate and on the other side if you hate for so long you secretly love.

[Amila Jay]

every thing's fair in love and war! Nice write :)

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Alex Vidmar]

beautiful. nuff said

[Siren]

Wow... This makes an impact, I think. It totally smacks you in the face. Great write.

[Dayran]

All's fair in love and war? Nice write!

[Luke Ritta]

thanks for shearing this poem...very nice.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Yes, the reality is cruel, but love always survive, if we keep it in our hearts..Thank you for sharing!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

what a hopeful and positive message!

[Tamia123]

It short and to the point. very powerful words in a few lines. Good job :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A short but powerful statment, well done, good read.