Examination.

Tick tock, tick tock,

Waiting, waiting, patiently waiting.

Writing, writing, i hear pens writing.

Breathing, Coughing, Sneezing.

Listening to the sounds around me.

Sitting in an exam room, wishing I wasn't.

Can't remember the answers, Can't concerntrate.

So distracted by people and all of their noise.

When will this end? When can I leave?

There's no point in staying, when i can't even think,

I just want to leave, I don't want to stay.

As the noises grow louder my heads getting fuller.

I can't control it, the pain is rising.

My heads going to explode.

am i going to make it?

Nobody knows.

Reviews

[Lowesy]

really like the way you started this, the repetition and rule of 3 was really good, just take another look at some grammar problems you have a good little poem

[Marie]

I can feel the tenseness of an examination room in this poem.

[patricia]

I remember the feeling well. You took me back a few years here. Especially to the silence of it all, where every little noise is magnifield. Thankyou.

[Who Cares]

Check your capitalization through the poem. "i" should be capitaized as well as the first letter in every line should be capitalized. I like the first three lines, the repitition gives them power and I can relate to this feeling.

[AK]

Haha! Really nice!

[SlightlyOdd]

Ha i love it really funny total test-a- phobia

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this, reminds me of tests in school. Such a silent room besides that;
"Writing, writing, i hear pens writing.
Breathing, Coughing, Sneezing."
Nicely done, you described it really good.

[Sam Severn]

I love the cinematic feel of this poem! The raw emotions have an apocalyptic, end-of-the-world vibe n' the "tick tock tick tock" opening paints pictures in my head that are super-vivid! Imaginatively-crafted n' the just cool as HELL! ㋡

[jennifer little]

great job keep up the good work

[khalid]

very nice