(Not Finished.)

My heart beats for love.

Your heart beats for anger.

 

I fight for what's right.

When you fight for whats wrong.

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

this could be so much bigger! but it works being small, the only problem with that is, to the reader it says, im not big enough to overcome anger or overcome whatever influence or problem he had over you! its a wonderful start! it works both ways. (:

[jennifer little]

great work thanks for sharing this with me

[Emerald Seas]

After reading your post last evening, I can understand where this is coming from for you. Yet, your reader is allowed to see this for themselves. Short, and to the point. If you're looking for grammatical accuracy, you need an apostrophe on the second *whats* to *what's*... although I believe spelling each out to *what is* would be slightly more dramatic (IMHO)