(Not Finished.)

My heart beats for love.

Your heart beats for anger.

 

I fight for what's right.

When you fight for whats wrong.

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

this could be so much bigger! but it works being small, the only problem with that is, to the reader it says, im not big enough to overcome anger or overcome whatever influence or problem he had over you! its a wonderful start! it works both ways. (:

[lei]

it will make a beautiful one....

[AK]

Going fine. It makes a good start. Will make a good poem when it's done.

[BS Johnson]

Good start. Finish it so I can! haha

[That_Guy]

Keep it up

[Marie]

I think this poem has a very fine conclusion.

[patricia]

this is interesting, wonder how it will end. Thanks.

[Who Cares]

Great concept and I cannot wait to read it when it is finished.

[SlightlyOdd]

Hmm I'd like to see where you're going with this

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You show two sides of people in this write, nice.