(Not Finished.)

My heart beats for love.

Your heart beats for anger.

 

I fight for what's right.

When you fight for whats wrong.

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

this could be so much bigger! but it works being small, the only problem with that is, to the reader it says, im not big enough to overcome anger or overcome whatever influence or problem he had over you! its a wonderful start! it works both ways. (:

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like this poem the way it is

nice job

[Tamia123]

You could end it here if you wanted to :) Its good already :)

[Suze]

I agree that this could really use a couple more stanzas, but since you titled it "not finished" then maybe I didn't need to say that.....

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, unfinished, keep going my love x

[Becky Clancy]

Love it :DDD

[Morrigan Nicole]

a great start!

[stars are far]

this is so nice ,shrot and expressing :D

[♋ Iris ♋]

This could totally grow into something amazing, Hope you finish it!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Unfinished or not, I like ....

Jazzy :)

[Sunflower]

this is and will be a very excellent write