(Not Finished.)

My heart beats for love.

Your heart beats for anger.

 

I fight for what's right.

When you fight for whats wrong.

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

this could be so much bigger! but it works being small, the only problem with that is, to the reader it says, im not big enough to overcome anger or overcome whatever influence or problem he had over you! its a wonderful start! it works both ways. (:

[MusicLover]

I agree with Michel

[Barbara Walker]

This ia good start to, if I know you, a great poem. Don't forget your apostrophes!

[Amila Jay]

It's great :)

[Alex Vidmar]

cant wait for this to be finished, unless it already is. :) this is wonderful.

[Dayran]

Right and wrong....its likely that love treats both imposters the same. Nice write!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I really like it! =D

[Rasputin]

No offense, but this is more like a bumper sticker than a poem.

[Sophie]

Just thought of this, didn't know if you wanted suggestions:
"But I know I can't take flight
I know I can't resist any longer."

[Siren]

This could stand alone the way it is, I think. It's that good.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, nice beginning, i`m impatiently waiting for the end ...:)