I am.

I can't fly,

I can't really multiply.

I can't dance,

I can't take a chance.

I'm useless,

I'm ugly.

Unworthy, Nobody loves me.

I'm shameful,

i'm worthless,

but most of all..

I'm lonely

 

Reviews

[exotic flotsam]

Take a flight, with a calculator in hand, to a dance studio, which requires taking a chance and becomes useful to your dance partner, who thinks your both pretty cool looking, who will think you a worthy partner, love you for that because shameless dance if the most liberating, worth the entertainment value alone, and keeps you company. Not that I dance. I just needed to cover all your issues. Look not to others hoping to find yourself. Then read this Haiku.

Void, empty, lost, afraid
Racing toward nothing known
The light, in my hand

[reflectingus]

This feelings are understandable. I've gone through the same phase several times, and you have captured your feelings very well. I love how you wrote this very candidly, and kept it curtailed.
Feeling of being lonely is pretty normal, many have felt it, however, trust me, it gets better eventually. You just need to remember all those who love you very much, and live to please yourself instead of others :)
Good job!

[Ayanda Mteto]

It is so sad, but a beautiful poem :-)

[Sleeping Maiden]

hmmm..very depressing.. i like the feelings of sadness..very melancholy. Nice write. Very straight forward.

[Amer Almadani]

A self-deprecating poem, like no other.

[Lagachu]

i like the poem. it is sad and creates the sad emotion

[khalid]

sad emotions in nice writing

[SlightlyOdd]

A good way to describe how we all feel on a very bad day it's very nice and to the point

[Who Cares]

Nineth and tenth line, The first letter needs to be capiatalized. I like first four lines rhyming but the others don't, it is orgininal. The meaning is deep and many can relate. Nice work

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Loneliness gathers weakness well. You express this and emotion well in this poem. I really do like this. Simple words and small writes yet they make good impacts, you are good at this. Though you are beautiful.

[SapphirianVampiress]

This is sad and upsetting. It is meaningful and over all great poem. This is amazing