Hoping.

You left me broken,

You left me bleeding.

I was so broken, No one could hear me.

Now here you are, telling me you've changed.

I tell you it's over, but you tell me you love me.

So now i am hoping,

Hoping you have changed.

because if you haven't I'll never let you back again.

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

Short simple makes sense and doesn't come of as being simple minded good

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Hope is certainly something and you write it well in this with that feeling. Nice one.

[SapphirianVampiress]

This is great.
It takes the simple normality of today's society and making it something that people can understand. Wonderfully written.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

A common saying:
Getting back with someone who left you is like reading a book again...you know how it will end.

[Amila Jay]

Taking chances over some one who first dumps you and then comes back for you, the wound is renewed to more pain if he repeats history, but don't let someone like that take control of your life if hurt amongst pretenses is what he knows to give. Excellent poem!

[Who Cares]

Powerful, and the sense of forgivness but hesitstation with it is great. Yet again another great piece. Imagery Is pretty nice too. Good job you really do have talent. I love reading your work.