Hoping.

You left me broken,

You left me bleeding.

I was so broken, No one could hear me.

Now here you are, telling me you've changed.

I tell you it's over, but you tell me you love me.

So now i am hoping,

Hoping you have changed.

because if you haven't I'll never let you back again.

Reviews

[Geraldine]

Awww, guys are such a headache.^^ oh dear, if he never change, tell him no more chance. :D 'Cause you already have given it to him.

[AK]

Good write!

[Emerald Seas]

It doesn't hurt to hope. This is straight forward and speaks from the heart.
People do change, but don't allow yourself to be used...
Some don't get it right the second time around either. I'd say a good rule is three strikes and you're out.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A STRAIGHT FORWARD PROCLAMATION .. OF THE HEART ... TRYING ONE AGAIN , TO RETAIN LOVE ..

I LIKE .. JAZZY

[patricia]

what to do when we are already in the dance? these things run their course i find. it is good to live and learn. Thanks...it might help to listen to what he does, instead of what he says. Thanks.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I'm sorry for you. But people do change. I did - twice. First from good to bad, and then from bad to good again. But hope's a b***h for me, because I always manage to get disappointed XD So no one can really tell you whether you should believe him or not - that's for you to judge and decide.

[Marie]

I'm sorry girl; they never change. Don't believe him.

[jennifer little]

thanks for sharing this with me it was a wonderful poem

[Sleeping Maiden]

Lovely poem. Hope is a very interesting thing. Sometimes it creates problems though due to having to decide whether or not to trust that person to be back in your life again. I like the message of this poem. Short, simple but the message is loud and clear!

[khalid]

nice writing but how can you judge changes if he is not back?