Hoping.

You left me broken,

You left me bleeding.

I was so broken, No one could hear me.

Now here you are, telling me you've changed.

I tell you it's over, but you tell me you love me.

So now i am hoping,

Hoping you have changed.

because if you haven't I'll never let you back again.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Saddneed in it's shortness, well done.

[Becky Clancy]

Love it!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

short and to the point...

...nice

[Lowesy]

Morrigan

[Lowesy]

Hey Nicole... I'm awesome! :D

Nice poem (obviously not the content), you're getting better with your grammar and punctuation (apart from the lower case I on the 6th line), keep going!

[Morrigan Nicole]

that is why i say that men are overrated.

[Thea]

Oh, such emotions here...You've expressed it very well!
Great work!
:)))

[Brantwijn]

Another poem in which you have fit a lot of meaning into just a few lines. Great job!

[♋ Iris ♋]

I like this one a lot. I know the feeling all too well. Awesome!