My evening Prayer.

My God. My Saviour. My Best Friend.

Please help me get through this you know that I can.

Look after all of those who don’t know who you are.

I love you my father, I’ll love you forever.

Please forgive my many mistakes,

Please help me to guide others to do your will.

Goodnight My Heavenly Father,

I’ll talk to you soon; it’s time for me to sleep now,

Goodnight and amen.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Delightfully sweet, well done, good read.

[Missy Moooooo]

This is sweet, and amazing. I love it. :)

[AK]

Nice poem. Some things I noticed-
1. Why is it that you capitalise the letter 'm' in 'my' in the first line?
2. Great thought, but it just doesn't flow. Try working on it?
3. You could try using more descriptive words so that your emotions are better expressed.
4. Your punctuation needs a look please?
Keep writing!
Akanksha Suresh

[Racy Daniel]

Sure it's a poem but most of all it is a prayer. It seems that you are a man of prayer otherwise you wouldn't be able to write such kind of beautiful prayer. Superb!!!!
The ending is just perfect.

[Me]

excellent poem.

[Tamia123]

THis is very pretty :) i think the format you put it in and the font helped make it so good. Good write :)

[ShaneBerry]

the font is very distracting from the emotion of the prayer. as an atheist i cant say this struck me very hard. but it seems to be well thought and not selfish. thanks for sharing. besides the font i would say good work. maybe a thicker font would help.

[Marie]

A wonderful prayer.

[Emerald Seas]

A very nicely written poem - and prayer. Well done.