My all.

HUG me KISS me, GIVE me your all,

don't ever LEAVE me, you mean so much more.

the world is full of hatred, the world is full of war.

But I will GIVE you my love, I will GIVE you my all.

Author's Note

#Inspired by my Boy.

Reviews

[Sophie]

I likee how brief it is, but it still drives the point. Good job :)

[5minutesofcrazy]

Quality. The rhyme is legit. The structure seems loose before putting the entire thing together. It works really well. It's simple, yet within that it is complex merely in terms of technique. The words themselves are golden. Not the biggest fan of the capitalizing of whole words, because I think your word choice is very direct, and no added emphasis is needed (that could also just be the fact that I'm a graphic designer). The balance in the words you use is great. Thank you!

[RastaFlowers]

Ohh how I love my boyfriend :) I like it and its a great idea, a really great idea that I think could be elaborated on easily :)