My all.

My all.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

HUG me KISS me, GIVE me your all,

don't ever LEAVE me, you mean so much more.

the world is full of hatred, the world is full of war.

But I will GIVE you my love, I will GIVE you my all.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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SuicidePact.
#Inspired by my Boy.

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This is awesome :) great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwww :) This is such a pretty poem :) Good Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful thoughts of devotion ...

I like .. Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is nice. Short sweet and to the point. well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


its a nice work. it reminds me of what i tell my gf when im not busy tryna keep one. and it involved more than self worries, the world at war and full of hatred ... these are all true. its really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) that was really awesome to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw...Might be short but the idea speaks so much......It reflects such sincerity...Great work!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice job keep up the good work i loved reading this piece thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice flow, liked the third line being included here...explaining why love is so important. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brief and to the point... and what more could a fella want

Posted 12 Years Ago



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