My all.

HUG me KISS me, GIVE me your all,

don't ever LEAVE me, you mean so much more.

the world is full of hatred, the world is full of war.

But I will GIVE you my love, I will GIVE you my all.

Author's Note

#Inspired by my Boy.

Reviews

[Tasha]

Wonderfully expressed. Great job!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Kind of what love is all about, two people trying to make it together against all that is wrong in this world.

[Sleeping Maiden]

So sweet this is!! The love is definately expressed beautifully..
Great job!

[Kaylor Mason]

Now THAT is love! :)

[Krimson]

awwwww ^^ this is so sweet and cute.
short and sweet and to the point

[Tomislav Petricevic]

You've done a great job, expressing so much with this small poem. Simple, yet effective!

[s.r.knight]

This is beautiful. I love the emphasis and repetition on the word GIVE. A lovely piece.

[Siren]

Great job! I like the way you did this--the first and last lines rhyming and then the middle two rhyming. It's an interesting style.

[Dayran]

Best offer a man may expect at any time. Nice!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this so small yet so cute!