What I wrote instead of doing QCS

LIFE is a ball game and you're the next batter.

 

LIFE is a battlefield and my hand's on the trigger.

 

LOVE is the key to happiness

 

LOVE is the reason for war.

 

HOPE is a dream, a reason to keep going.

 

HOPE is an untruth, setting you up for dissapointment.

 

TRUST is something you earn, not soemthing you're given.

 

TRUST is a gamble, where you can lose everything.

 

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

I agree. Nice Write. I love the formatting. Thanks for sharing :)

[Distant horizons]

A lot of truth in this. Great write.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow .. a lot of negative thoughts here .. Life it's self is a gamble .. Anything or any one, can be lost .. How you play the game, is kinda up to you ..

Interesting .. Jazz

[Amer Almadani]

You have inspired me to write a poem of a similar "FEEL". Thank you

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice written lines.

[fireblossom]

Yes.

[Becky Clancy]

I like it, but I don't understand what "QCS" stands for (:

i like this poem, its lovely and motivational

[SapphirianVampiress]

This is a really great amazing piece of work. It is life short and simple.