Story of my life

When I saw you

I knew you were the one.

you had a girlfriend, but to me that didn't matter.

So i kissed you and you kissed me back

I knew you liked me, I knew that for a fact

I get what I want, and I wanted you.

You wouldn't leave her, you said that was a stupid thing to do.

And when she dumped you, I thought that meant I had a chance,

But you took her back and I was cut.

And so was my body.

Then she dumped you yet again,

This time you came running back

You were with me, Oh boy was she happy.

Now you're devoted, to me and me only.

She treated you badly, something I never will,

I won't forget all the pain that you caused me,

But baby, Oh baby I love you with all my being.

 

Author's Note

#Don't judge me because I was involved with a Cheater, he isn't like that, his gf was an emotional abuser, didn't care that he was depressed, treated him like Crap. and She was really horrible, we were friends both vulnverable at the time, suffering depression which led us together. I'm not some home wrecker, and i do not support cheating!!

#this is not a very good poem.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I love the story of your life. This is so realistic, I have seen this kind of stuff happening, so it's actually easy to relate to. I love how you have just simply put down all your feelings, and no, I don't think this is a crap poem, and yes, the idea is great, though I think it would be great if you make it a bit longer, work a bit harder on it, because I've read your other works, so yeah, I know you can turn this great beginning into a masterpiece. :)

PS- I'm glad you guys ended up being together ;)

[Who Cares]

The concept was great but the flow not so much. With some revising it has a ton of potential. I have had a similar situtaion but we never ended up together.

[Alex Vidmar]

This is great. I also love the song of the same title. This is well written. Love it.

[That_Guy]

i had a similar situation with the genders reversed, well done

[Marie]

Well, the idea is okay. I'm glad it had a happy ending; it so easily have turned out badly.

[Angelic Surrender]

I think it's pretty good.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sometimes Love can not forget .. but it does forgive .. .. Letting the past stay forever in the past .. it's a part of what Love is all about ... .. No crap here .. Just young hearts speaking ....

I like .. Jazz

[jennifer little]

great poem loved reading this poetry thanks for sharing this with me

[patricia]

this is not a crap poem! the love triangle you described was well done. Emotive. A familiar story with what seems to be a happy outcome. Thankyou.