Story of my life

When I saw you

I knew you were the one.

you had a girlfriend, but to me that didn't matter.

So i kissed you and you kissed me back

I knew you liked me, I knew that for a fact

I get what I want, and I wanted you.

You wouldn't leave her, you said that was a stupid thing to do.

And when she dumped you, I thought that meant I had a chance,

But you took her back and I was cut.

And so was my body.

Then she dumped you yet again,

This time you came running back

You were with me, Oh boy was she happy.

Now you're devoted, to me and me only.

She treated you badly, something I never will,

I won't forget all the pain that you caused me,

But baby, Oh baby I love you with all my being.

 

Author's Note

#Don't judge me because I was involved with a Cheater, he isn't like that, his gf was an emotional abuser, didn't care that he was depressed, treated him like Crap. and She was really horrible, we were friends both vulnverable at the time, suffering depression which led us together. I'm not some home wrecker, and i do not support cheating!!

#this is not a very good poem.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I love the story of your life. This is so realistic, I have seen this kind of stuff happening, so it's actually easy to relate to. I love how you have just simply put down all your feelings, and no, I don't think this is a crap poem, and yes, the idea is great, though I think it would be great if you make it a bit longer, work a bit harder on it, because I've read your other works, so yeah, I know you can turn this great beginning into a masterpiece. :)

PS- I'm glad you guys ended up being together ;)

[Siren]

This is a great story. I'm glad you added the background, though I wouldn't have judged you anyway. You did a good job on this poem--it's not a bad one. It's great.

[Bats In The Belfry]

When your young, not married, and babies aren't involved it doesn't count as cheating in my book.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It is guided to say the least, may we see the next of those yeilded, well done.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

its intriguing to see a different perspective from someone else on cheating and unfaithfulness

[Dayran]

Its important to know what you want! Nice write!

[AK]

Amazing poem!

[Tamia123]

Love is not something you can control. Cheating is wrong but I get where your coming from. Good write!

[khalid]

love is blind, thats all, nice writing

[Missy Moooooo]

It's an amazing poem. (:
Great job.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This is very realistic. I saw these kind of situations a few times. A good poem! :)