Rain, fall down and wash me away

Standing in a shower of rain,

I've dropped my life into a puddle,

Let the heavens wash away my pain,

Hold my hand to prevent my stumble.

 

If I fall will you pick me up?

If you slip what would we do?

Standing in the ran, Wash me away.

Wash me away,

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Very sensual! love it, great poem:)

[Becky Clancy]

I really love this poem, it was short, but very moving at the same time (:

short,simple,deep,and outstanding,i like it

[megan brooks]

amazing! just like the others! composed by a very talented writer :)

[SapphirianVampiress]

This is simply beautiful

[Morrigan Nicole]

Amen, Sister! Spoken like a true poet!

[SlightlyOdd]

Hmmm this is good but are you really alone the flow is good but that confuses me a little

[Alex Vidmar]

I like this. Very much. :)

[Who Cares]

Wonderful imagery, Your words are powerful and this is clearly shown. It was short and simple but yet the reader was left with an overpowering thought.