Rain, fall down and wash me away

Rain, fall down and wash me away

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Standing in a shower of rain,

I've dropped my life into a puddle,

Let the heavens wash away my pain,

Hold my hand to prevent my stumble.

 

If I fall will you pick me up?

If you slip what would we do?

Standing in the ran, Wash me away.

Wash me away,

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Good, good write. I love this. It's dark but hopeful, and shows the beauty of death. Amazing job. You did a great job here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like a child's nursery rhyme gone to hell.....Powerful n' potent stuff! My favorite poem of yours, so far.... ㋡

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good write! keep it up~!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short, but you sure picked the right words!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very nice again!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another good piece that has a good meaning :) Great Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Direct and without mercy, a great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its difficult facing up to choices sometimes. It may appear that its easier to have someone 'wash me away' and make the decisions for us. Where you are in a puddle, this can lead you to an ocean. Then perhaps we are forced to make some choices. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this poem sounds like you could maybe sing it as a song? Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. Sounds like it would be a good song too. This is sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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