My Night Last night

This is a true story of what happened between my bf and me...except for the ending! hes' aLIVE!

He told me life wasn't worth living,

I told him to live for me,

 

He told me he stuffs everything up,

I told him he still has me,

 

He told me he's not worth it,

I told him he's worth the world.

 

He told me he'd never be happy,

so I told him, I'd make him.

 

He told me he loves me,

I told him, I'll never stop.

 

He told me he wants  to end everything.

so I asked if that included me.

 

He said, No babe, don't twist what I say,

I said, but I thought I was your everything.

 

He's suicidal and there's nothing I can do,

and I wiped the tears from my eyes as I cried,

 

"You're the only thing keeping me here" he said

"Please don't leave me!" I begged and I begged

 

But it was no use, he was already dead.

 

 

 

Author's Note

# he didn't actually die, but i thought that was a good ending

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I've had talks like this many a time into the night. Just sitting there, listening and letting others talk to me, calming them out of thoughts. I really like this and it's sad that this is real because i know the pain that comes with a suicidal person is very intense. Keep writing though, it's a lovely poem. ^-^

[Chris]

Sometimes we "control" the stories... and sometimes we live them.

[Jibey]

Smiles... it moved along with good pace... and it was a good idea to let him die at the end... *grins*

[Morrigan Nicole]

Yes, the ending was good. I loved this really! touching in a strange way. Great job!
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