Ich Liebe Dich

He calls me his angel

I call him my bear.

 

He holds my hand

running my fingers through his hair,

 

I look him in the eye,

he's my cutie pie.

 

He's my protector,

his strength makes me feel safe.

 

Fall asleep in his arms,

he wakes up in mine

 

when we're apart,

he's always in my heart.

 

He's the king of all Huggers,

He makes my day great.

 

When he kisses me hello,

When I'm kissing him goodbye,

 

I will always love him,

he will always love I.

 

Author's Note

# I know that "He will always love I" is grammatically incorrect, but I wanted it to rhyme with goodbye.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A lovely write :))

[Dayran]

Sometimes the simplest things say more. Nice write!

[Siren]

Lovely. I like this a lot. You did a great job! :D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so nice and freely flowing poem :)
I like it, the way it sounds like a song!
thank you for sharing!
~nia ~

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Awwwww...

this made me feel so good for some time!

[Thea]

Aw! This was so adorable and beautiful!
Sweet poem!
:)))

[Brantwijn]

A very cute sense of playful affection to this one. Good job.

[Tamia123]

The "I" had a good effect :) Good job!

[AK]

Very nice! Don't worry about the 'I' part. People grasp the rhyming scheme by the end of the poem anyways;D

[Jack Isaac]

Don't worry about the last line... you want to be creatively free (poetic license) in forging a unique style for yourself. Throwing off the reader on the last line is minor compared to somewhere in the middle of the poem... and the middle of this poem perfectly good. Think of a catchy line though, like "His heart belongs to me, myself, and I" This poem is well writen IMO (in my opinion). Thanks Ms. Pact :)