Some People Just Don't learn.

July 13th 1989

 

Guess who had the nerve to show up again today! and it appears as though he was waiting for me to arrive as well, he really does have nerve doesn't he. It's almost as though he likes watching my hatred grow for him.

"It's you...again" I say unamused.

 

"Did you miss me?" he asks thinking that he's the funniest guy in the world, which he clearly is not.

"If I say yes will you leave me alone?"

"No"

"Ditto"

"I never got the chance to tell you how much i like your name yesterday"

"Thanks, never knew I had to get your approval." I say coldly, trying my best to ignore him, although he's making it rather difficult.

"You never even asked me what my name was, i was kind of offended, It's Tera in case you were wondering, which you were, I can tell, you've been thinking about me all night haven't you"

"You truely are more up yourself, than I gave you credit for."

The one thing I hate about Tera the most is, he was right I had thought about him all night.

Author's Note

# should i add more to this entry? or leave it at that and start the next one?

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

like before, you ended this on a great level. i love the fighting between them and the revealing of Tera's character. i had a feeling it was him. i am always fond of books and movies where querreling rivals fall in love. it has a certain feel to it i am always attracted to. keep it up.

[quixotic_rose]

awe thats so cute :)

[Amila Jay]

Cool! very nice:)

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With this, I think it stands fine on its own so far. Though the developing relationship is fine, some sort of conflict should be introduced soon, maybe something that doesn't have anything to do with them directly or something that will.
Or you could make there first encounter a much more tumultuous, the kind of thing that would not give away their attraction beneath the surface.
Keep in mind, these are subjective suggestions, in other words someone else might have a completely different view. I like the quarreling, but make take it up a level, don't be afraid to step outside your comfort zone.

[Raven Starhawk]

I certainly hope you do add more. I am really getting into this.

[jennifer little]

wonderful write great job ....... thanks for sharing this with me

[AK]

Ha! I liked the last line. But from the previous chapters I gathered that Tera was a kind of boring guy not so swollen headed and full of life? May be he changed I guess. Just one advice, try fixing your character's behaviour before starting a story. Usually, it's simplest to base a character on a real person whom you know really well. Try placing the protagonist as yourself and the other main characters as your best friends, et cetera. Hope that helps!