Messages on the Wall

Messages scrawled upon the walls of a bathroom stall,

Gossip and expressions of hatred toward those who are considered friends,

So i sit there for a while,

As I take in the words that surround me,

Expected to find something that describes myself,

But there is nothing,

not one small mention.

So I grab my pen from my pocket,

So when the next girl enters,

The big black permanent message she'll find will read:

'Jenna, that b***h You'd better not cross'

Reviews

[Jibey]

Well, our minds keep on turning while we're sitting there! When there is something to read it makes the moments pass with more interest! And how fascinating are human beings - even their scrawls on a lavatory wall tells us of lives filled with loving and laughing, with joys and sorrows, with warmth and cold hatred... and I was amused to think of you venting your spleen with such energy, walking away satisfied, as the waters flushed behind you...

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I like the twist at the end of this poem. :)

[Angelic Surrender]

nice :)

[RastaFlowers]

I love this lol

[Anonymous Me]

i love this. it made me laugh, and i'm now thinking: why the heck didn't i think of that

[Juliet]

This poem is excellent. I find myself doing the same thing in bathrooms at times and this really sums up what we all should do. :) Great work once again.

[Dayran]

Cute!

[Suze]

This would be a great poem to read aloud to people. I really like it. :)

[SapphirianVampiress]

Well done, this is well written and definantly different.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

How perfectly indulgent, the writing of a savoured foe, a great piece.