Opposites Attract

Opposites Attract

A Poem by SuicidePact.

left, right,

Black, White,

up, down,

straight, round

girl, boy

tidy, messy,

fat, skinny,

happy, sad

lonely, crowded

love, hate,

clean, dirty,

you, me,

 

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Why the caps on Black and White? Are you the right, white me?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very clever and cute. Not cute like pat you on the head and say oh that's so cute... but cute as in attractive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmmm.... yes, this is cute. Simple yet effective. I think you can do better. You're a good writer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute !

I could say a lot more about this
poem, but I want Pact to get
acquainted first.
-----John

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice. It's clean and simple but powerful. I love reading your writting!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2012
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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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