Opposites Attract
A Poem by SuicidePact.
left, right, Black, White, up, down, straight, round girl, boy tidy, messy, fat, skinny, happy, sad lonely, crowded love, hate, clean, dirty, you, me,
© 2012 SuicidePact.
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Why the caps on Black and White? Are you the right, white me?
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Very clever and cute. Not cute like pat you on the head and say oh that's so cute... but cute as in attractive.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Hmmmm.... yes, this is cute. Simple yet effective. I think you can do better. You're a good writer.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Cute !
I could say a lot more about this
poem, but I want Pact to get
acquainted first.
-----John
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Very nice. It's clean and simple but powerful. I love reading your writting!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on March 12, 2012
Last Updated on March 12, 2012
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SuicidePact. Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia
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