S.L.U.T

a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

Author's Note

#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

Reviews

[5minutesofcrazy]

This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

[Corkee1808]

Some of what I think of my friends!

[Clare the Artist]

i like it. strong use of all the words & sometimes its necessary to swear

[Donald Cole]

writing can be therapy, and yes using those words can help heal, like you take the words to erase the words.
good to get it out.....can't walk through these things unless they are out where you can walk through them
Keep walking.....
Don

[ghost writer]

blimey! (not offended) You didnt hold back on that one LOL

[Eden Maple<3]

i absolutely loved this!!!! you are a extremely talented writer!

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adding it to my library!!!! AWESOME WRITE! seriously i LOVED this poem! AMAZING!

[Mashairi]

This is a sad poem, but it's very powerful. Well done :)

[TaylorH'sPoems]

sad but a good poem

[victoria]

well written piece, the writer appears angry and condemning of the subject, this comes across well, though I can't help but feel for the subject of the poem.

[just another guy...]

holy awesomeness. this is really good. if it involves emotion, then its perfectly fine to swear. at least thats what i believe... good work :)