S.L.U.T

a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

Author's Note

#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

Reviews

[5minutesofcrazy]

This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I love this. It describes everything i've ever felt towards one of my friends. You put it into words so easily and i'm glad you did.

[Marie]

I don't object to the words "f**k" or "w***e". But it isn't right to call any woman this.

[ba_mcfarlane]

I understand your anger, betrayal always hurts. But, I think of how lonely your former friend must be, to sacrifice her morality for something that she can pretend is being loved, if only for moments, and by someone who doesn't give a damn about her.
A great write, the profanity works, it would be lesser without it.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Tragic!!!

[Emrick]

This is nice.

[JustBeYou]

AMEN you tell em'

[Alexis L. Thompson]

YES! this is awesome!!!!

[The Analog Kid]

Damn. This even has some good rhymes:) Nice.