S.L.U.T

a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

Author's Note

#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

Reviews

[5minutesofcrazy]

This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

[Geraldine]

For me this is really intense. I bet you really poured your emotions in there which is evident. :) You don't have to say sorry, you're just writing what and how you feel. It's a great write.

[The Wave]

Some girls, well pardon the expression, don't get why being a cum dumpster is a negative quality. Nicely penned!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is a subject that has touched the lives of many women, especially teens. Many think he will love them if they give in and then find out they are just put in line for the next guy. It is a sad existence but one that can be overcome with growth of self-confidence and self-esteem. Learning to love oneself is a beautiful start. Well penned.

[r. f. jordan]

poetry can be an effective therapeutic tool, providing an outlet for me to express pain without taking it out on others in a destructive manner. this speaker sounds highly charged, and yet as author you were able to create rather than destroy, i admire the work that has been done here.

[ba_mcfarlane]

My friend, ignore the "slander" comment, I am often amazed by what some people will do to get attention. That opinion of mine is reinforced by the narcissistic profile of said previous commentator....Some mothers do have them....I wonder if he is going to sue me now?

[☢ZoMbIeS sLaYeR&#..]

great poem. i been called a s**t and w***e. many times it put me through a depression. i have to go to anger classes now because of it, it just got that bad, to the point where i was punching that walls because of that. i hate being called that. so again great job on this poem! 2 thumbs up

[Tabitha t]

very powerful. very agressive and honestly I think it is a little bit one sided. beautiful none the leaste but... what made this person go looking for love so carelessly that they gave everyone a small piece of themselfs. Bad family? abuse? labeling someone a s**t can have disasterous consequences. How can you tell a story... unless you know the whole story yourself?

[Brianna Van Zandt]

This is really good, full of emotion.