S.L.U.T

a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

Author's Note

#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

Reviews

[5minutesofcrazy]

This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

[Alex Vidmar]

Already read this Jenn. But love it anyways.

[Laura Storm]

Filled with raw emotions. I'm sorry this happened to you. Keep your head up and stay strong.

[caroline]

any words are fine I think. why not cuss in poetry or stories. I great progression in what is happening to the person.

[Lexi-Lu]

This is amazing! And if It's about you, ignore those who hurt. But, amazing poem!

[EmoVampyrePoet]

I understand how you're feeling, sweetheart. My friend Lelia is the same way as your friend.

[$êlvån]

needs quite a lot of editing...the theme ws gud one...series of ques being put up.....so all in all i enjoyed the gng of this poem but somewhere personally i would like to advice that put some more efforts:)....cheers:)

[S. Michael Long]

i like this even more now that i know the back story (:

[Invisable_Girl]

good poem though. its a good write:)

[Invisable_Girl]

i used to get called names and called a good time because some kids thought it would be funny to post bad inapporiate things on my facebook calling me a w***e and s**t bucket. i thought of death many times. and its doesnt feel good. but some people who act like w****s and stuff. mayb thts all they know. they could come from a bad family and thts the only way they actually feel anything. so dont judge somebody if they do those things. cuz some times they are way worse of than u think. they could have benn raped their whole life and feel tainted and the only way they even feel one ounce of love is by giving their bodys away so plz dont judge.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Its very good, it really gives out that attitude that you know what your talking about. Im sry about your friend though, maybe you could make some new ones!