S.L.U.T

a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

Author's Note

#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

Reviews

[5minutesofcrazy]

This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Awwww...
I can relate to the pain you feel.

[Susanna F]

I really feel this poem. I don't know if you would agree, but it seems part of the pain is not just feeling left by a friend, but watching her loss of self-respect. Whatever the "modern view," this IS self-destructive behavior, physically and especially emotionally. I hope she wakes up before it is too late.

[Juliet]

Wow. I've seen quite a few poems titled this on here, but this one is the first that truly impacted me the way I feel it should have. This is a wonderfully raw piece and I'm glad that you shared with us, even though it must have been brought on by some emotional turmoil. I hope things get better, but just know your writing is great.

[Jibey]

Good strong writing, in which you express your disgust at the way your friend deserted you for the good time... that could so easily become the bad time... as you readily declare... 'f**k' and 'f*****g' used with feeling... and effect..

[Angelic Surrender]

This is really good. great message

[Jami Nicole]

We all have or have had that friend. I'm sorry you felt this way, but I do love how I could feel the anger and hatred running rampant in this. It's very well written. :)

[SlightlyOdd]

It's good everyone had to deal with someone like that and you expressed it quite well if i tried to described i probably would have cursed more but the result wouldn't have been as good as this poem i like it

[Alex Vidmar]

Not sure if i reviewed this already. but i love this one. it's so true.

[AchingAlexandra]

I really like this poem . It's well written , and the message is clear . It's relate-able as well , because almost everyone knows at least a couple girls who sleep with everyone that they know .
all in all , a very good poem . Good job ! (: