Nerves x 1,000 000

Tomorrow i am shooting a scene with an entire girls football team and i am really nervous!! I'm playing their Coach and I hardly even know them or how to play soccer!!!

Tomorrow's the day,

the day of the year.

I'm going to pray

I'll remember my gear.

 

I don't really feel

as though i can do it.

it's a big deal.

I hope i get through it

 

I'm so freaking scared,

I'll forget all my lines

I'll be under prepared

but they say i'll be fine

 

I feel so alone

I can't close my eyes

my nerves have grown

thank god for no guys

 

I think I will fall

I know that for sure

I can't play ball.

it's just something I'll need to endure

 

Reviews

[Wren]

Love the rhyming scheme and the topic. Great write!

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

The rhythm is kind of whacky, but it's pretty good. I think you could really expand it a bit more and people would be able to relate to it. Good writing!

[Sahar moonlight]

Ths was really interesting one. From first line to last line.
Really enjoyable :)
I bet you had a great match!

[NatCat]

I must be reading this awhile after your big day but I'm sure it went well... If you can write like that then I'm sure you can deliver your lines just as well

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I enjoy how you expressed yourself so honestly!

[SapphirianVampiress]

This is good.

[Angelic Surrender]

Good piece :) i like it

[Dayran]

The short lines create a breathless effect that delivers the poem with an anxiety laden worry. Well done!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect wording and imagery, the flow is settled enough to leave the reader surprised and grateful, well done, good read.