falling

Hold me in your arms,

and never let me go,

kiss me quick before

you have to go,

i can't stop falling

no I can't stop the way i feel.

I'm falling for you,

and i just can't control it.

I'm falling for you more each and everyday.

I think I love you

You know its true

I think I want you

and you want me to.

 

I think I need you

Yes i do.

I think you need me

How about you?

I can't control it,

no matter how I try

I can't contain it,

no that would be a crime.

falling, falling for you.

what a silly thing to do.

 

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

i very much enjoyed this poem and i have felt something similar to this few lines of your work:
"I think I need you
Yes i do.
I think you need me
How about you?
I can't control it,
no matter how I try
I can't contain it"

keep writting like this

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Lovely :) so sweet .... beautiful write

[5minutesofcrazy]

That's just nice. Thank you. Everything I've read of yours has impressed me, so far, and this did not disappoint. Using phrase-ology like that was astounding. Well done.

[Morrigan Nicole]

Okay, if i liked your "Love" one, then that was nothing compared to this one. I agree one hundred percent. I will explain the story to you through a message, as it is too private to expose to the world of writerscafe. REALLY THOUGH, I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS ONE!
I'm requesting to my friends.

100/100
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[exotic flotsam]

Crushes bursting into love's flames remains something over which we have no control You present that well here. Ya can't cause it to happen. Ya can't stop it from happening. I like this. I have several similar topical Haiku on my pages. Brevity is painful to pen, but potent when done well. Nice work.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love love poems... this is a good one. I like the last line .. ' what a silly thing to do' , very enjoyable poem.

Chloe

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love the title, it fits. Love the flow. Love the bits of rhyming. Love the little love story in this. Love it. The expressed feeling in this is simply, good.

[Tai Ryens]

Wonderful flow, despite the occasional grammar error, this poem is nicely written. This piece is amazingly put together, and I love the beginning of the second stanza. In particular, the first four lines.
Anyways, keep up the hard work!

[hmm]

Wonderful flow & rhyme scheme.
Amazing!

[The old me]

good flow and scheme. overall a great poem. well done as normal, your work never dissapoints.